This is really beautiful. The soft lighting, the texture, everything is just really smooth and easy. Her pose is so natural and relaxed, but the tilt of her eyebrows suggests attentiveness, as does the thoughtful twirling of a lock of hair. It bothered me at first, but I've decided I actually like the way the breasts and arms are sort of less focused and detailed than the hand and face. It draws attention to the more dynamic, expressive features. She looks as if her hips are just a little off kilter, swaying maybe, very sexy. I like the pearl tone of everything, especially the way her hair some how stands out against the background even though it's practically the same colour. The hair looks delicious, like one of those swirly dip-cones.
All around excellent. My only criticism is that the neck might be a little too long and narrow. Doesn't really look like it could support her head. Otherwise great though.
I completely agree with the originality rating. I was just going for a simple portrait, though, so there's not much originality to be had there, haha. I'm also very appreciative of the fact you noticed her expression, hips, and the lock of hair (almost imperceptible, though, so I should fix that).
I can see what you mean about the neck. Originally, it was more of a stylistic choice, since my characters have slightly exaggered proportions. But I'll definitely have a think over it when I tend to the other technical errors.
Thank you very much for such a thorough, honest and extremely observant critique.
All around excellent. My only criticism is that the neck might be a little too long and narrow. Doesn't really look like it could support her head. Otherwise great though.